ODf - the best option

I've created a presentation about ODF and OpenOffice.org. Nothing unusual in itself except that this is my first serious presentation. That makes it a personal milestone. I have created it as a presentation for my employer. I want to get as many comments back to smooth the rough edges on it before i actually show it. Am I over emphasizing or underemphasizing anything? The top link is to the file in ODF (ODP) presentation format and the bottom is to the file saved in flash format. It is licensed under a Creative Commons license so you can amend it for your own uses (go to notes view in Impress). http://www.4shared.com/file/96083559/dc0c641/Why_OpenOffice.html http://www.4shared.com/file/96083563/c6387c9c/Why_OpenOfficefl1.html